Hola everyone. Today I am showing you my favourite piece of writing so here it is.
The Forbidden Tower By Carley
Once upon a time, there were five kids:
Carley,Konrad, Saffire , Ele, and Hari, walking to the dairy.
When they came across a dark haunted
tower they decided to go in there. When they went
in there the door shut behind them. They heard a
voice saying “come play with us we won't hurt you please”!. They looked at the windows they were blocked. They kept on walking and saw the kid’s who were saying it. They were twin sisters not just any twin sisters they were possessed twin sisters. Then they walked into dolls. They tried to run out but someone was blocking the door. So they looked up and they saw zombie’s
They ran into a secret passage. Then they saw a warning sign It said warning danger lies ahead so they decided not to keep walking. They walked back into the tower and found a torch. They went into a dark room and found some skulls and
mould. Then,they stepped on some old wood and it creaked. They were so scared and then they found the back door and they ran out as fast as they could to the dairy. 
