Thursday, 2 January 2020
my charity that I'm interested in
my charity that I am interested in is the cancer Society because my friend Maddison had cancer i will tell you what cancer Society does it gets money so the people with cancer can see their family
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Kia Ora Carley,
ReplyDeleteThe Cancer Society is an amazing charity that does so much for so many people. Lots of people are affected by cancer or know someone who has it, and this charitable organisation really helps people who suffer from the disease.
Did you know, not only do the Cancer Society help sufferers see their families like you mentioned, but they also help them make new experiences, increase their quality of life, and even put money into researching the diseases to look for cures and preventions. They spread information and help the public as well.
I’m so proud of you for choosing to post about a charity that affects someone near you, your friend Maddison. It’s very kind of you to promote such a worthy cause because you know how much the charity helps her. You sound like a wonderfully supportive friend!
Quick tip: perhaps you could include some visuals of the similes you have created to really enhance your post. These could add interest and appeal to your readers.
Happy blogging,
Shannon (SLJ)