what three superpowers i would like to have for a day
3.invisibility because I can hide from my friends 2.teleportation so I can travel anywhere without going on a plane 1.drawing real stuff i made up this one so whatever I draw it comes to life
What an amazing list of superpowers. You’ve thought really hard about what to choose and I like how you have included reasoning behind your choices to let your readers understand where you are coming from.
I particularly like your last superpower. It reminds me a little bit of Spongebob when he accidentally uses a magic pencil to draw Doodlebob who turns out evil. I hope you’d use your powers for good instead! What sort of things would you do with your power? What would you draw
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration. Maybe you can draw some pictures as examples for the last superpower and attach them to your post.
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Kia Ora Carley,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing list of superpowers. You’ve thought really hard about what to choose and I like how you have included reasoning behind your choices to let your readers understand where you are coming from.
I particularly like your last superpower. It reminds me a little bit of Spongebob when he accidentally uses a magic pencil to draw Doodlebob who turns out evil. I hope you’d use your powers for good instead! What sort of things would you do with your power? What would you draw
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration. Maybe you can draw some pictures as examples for the last superpower and attach them to your post.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon (SLJ)