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Thursday, 2 January 2020

my list of food

10. apples 
9. chocolate 
8. plums 
7. peaches 
6. lemons 
5. mango 
4. strawberries
3. blackberries  
2. raspberries
1. blueberries 
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  1. Shannon at the SLJ Team6 January 2020 at 10:52

    Kia Ora Carley, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.

    Wow, what an amazing list of foods to bring on an ocean voyage. You’ve really thought hard about what to bring and included lots of goods that don’t require refrigeration. I also like how you have included an abundance of fruit. That’s super important when sailing with a crew because you need to keep them healthy so the ship can continue onwards. You’ll definitely prevent them from getting sick and make sure everyone is eating healthily!

    I really like how you have included so many coloured fruits, are they your favourite food? My favourite fruit is raspberries. There is a special strain that is orange and they are absolutely delicious. Have you ever tried them?

    It would be really awesome if you could include more pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration.

    Mā te wā
    Shannon (SLJ)

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